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Jumat, 14 Oktober 2011

The Terrible Experience in My Life

I have the most terrible experience in my life when I fell from the car. I was six years old at the time. My family and I want to went to the Jakarta Fair, and my uncle who drove the car. When traffic lights were green, the car swerved quickly. The car’s door  suddenly opened, so I fell down the road highway. Luckily, there were no vehicles behind our car. My mother ran and took me into the car. I'm very thankful to God because I did not get a serious injury and I am still given a life until today. I will never forget the terrible incidents in my life.

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Refika Amaleea Fitri mengatakan...

Em displeased to hear that.That's not good, isn't that? It's nice u underline the TS, so I can simply guess what will b in the rest of paragraph. However, u hafta elaborate ur supporting sentences more to give ur readers better comprehension on the accident u experienced. Please use more varied sentences. Thus, mind ur grammar when u write.

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