I have the most
terrible experience in my life when I fell from
the car. I was six years
old at the time. My family
and I want to went to the Jakarta Fair, and my
uncle who drove the car. When traffic lights were green, the car swerved
quickly. The car’s door suddenly opened, so I fell down the road highway. Luckily, there
were no vehicles behind our car. My
mother ran and took me into the car.
I'm very thankful
to God because I did not get a serious injury and I am
still given a life until today. I will
never forget the terrible incidents
in my life.

Jumat, 14 Oktober 2011
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Em displeased to hear that.That's not good, isn't that? It's nice u underline the TS, so I can simply guess what will b in the rest of paragraph. However, u hafta elaborate ur supporting sentences more to give ur readers better comprehension on the accident u experienced. Please use more varied sentences. Thus, mind ur grammar when u write.
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